Lead generation CRO

Lead Generation CRO Audit for the whole landing page

Most leads are lost before anyone reaches the form: a headline that does not say who it is for, an offer with no reason to act now, proof in the wrong place, three buttons pulling different ways. EyeCaptain audits the whole page, from the first screen to the form and what it promises, on desktop and mobile, and ranks the fixes by the enquiries they cost you.
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ACCOUNTING FIRM · SINCE 2009
Innovative financial solutions for your future
We are a team of dedicated professionals committed to excellence in everything we do.
Named accountant
Fixed monthly fee
Books closed by the 5th
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First name
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Annual revenue
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The whole page, zone by zone

  • First screenfix
  • Prooffix
  • Call to actionfix
  • Formfix
  • Mobilegood

01  One example

Four findings, from the headline down

The quote page of HALDEN, a demo accounting firm. The audit starts at the first screen, not at the form: each finding points at an element of the page and says what to change.

HALDEN
Innovative financial solutions for your future
A team of dedicated professionals committed to excellence.
Contact us
First name
Last name
Email
Phone
Company
Annual revenue
How did you hear about us?
Message
Submit
1

First screen: the headline says neither what you do nor for whom

High

"Innovative financial solutions for your future" could be a bank, an insurer or an app. The visitor cannot tell whether they are in the right place, so they never get as far as the form.

2

Form: eight fields to ask for a quote

High

Revenue, headcount and "how did you hear about us" before the first conversation. The page asks for a big commitment before it has earned one.

3

Call to action: grey, and it says "Submit"

Medium

Low contrast, it loses to the navigation in visual weight, and it does not say what the visitor gets. "Get my free quote" answers why they should press it.

4

Proof: logos with no meaning, far from the decision

Medium

Grey logos nobody recognises, under the copy. Your 212 client reviews are nowhere near the form.

02  Before and after

Same page, with the top changes

A headline that says what and for whom, the reviews beside the form, three fields instead of eight and a button that says what you get. The report shows every change like this, on your own page.

Now: 8 fields, "Submit"
After: 3 fields, proof beside it

We measure

What wins the eye on the first screen, how many elements compete with the button, 2.4 : 1 contrast, 8 fields, no review within 400px of the form.

We judge

The visitor does not know what you sell before they reach the form, and the form asks for more than a free quote needs.

We suggest

A new headline with the outcome, one client review above the button, 3 fields and "Get my free quote".

Sample report

See what it finds on a lead generation page

On the Northstar demo page the report reads the whole page: it credits the clear first screen, then finds the price and the best testimonial far from the form, nine fields, a pale "Submit" at 2.4:1 and no promise of when a reply comes, and says what to change.
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03  What it checks

The whole page, in six zones

The form is the last moment of a decision made further up the page. So the audit reads the page the way a visitor does, from the first screen to the button under the form.

01

First screen and message

  • What you do and for whom, in one sentence
  • The same promise as the ad that brought the visitor
  • One main button visible without scrolling

02

Offer and difference

  • Outcomes, not a list of services
  • Why you and not the next firm
  • A price or a range where you can

03

Proof and trust

  • Reviews with names, not anonymous logos
  • Proof next to the points of decision
  • Who will answer you, and when

04

Calls to action and attention

  • The main button wins the eye
  • Fewer exits: menus, links, rival buttons
  • The call to action repeated after each section that persuades

05

The form

  • Only the fields the first step needs
  • A button that says what the visitor gets
  • What happens after they submit

06

Mobile

  • Message and button on the phone's first screen
  • Tap to call where it makes sense
  • A form you can fill in with one thumb

04  Pages

Every page that asks for details

Pick the page type and the audit applies its rules. For SaaS and booking there are pages of their own. Built on Webflow, Wix or Squarespace? See what changes on each platform.

ADS

Landing pages for ads

Google, Meta, LinkedIn: we check that the first screen keeps the ad's promise.

SERVICE

Service pages

Accountants, lawyers, clinics, builders, agencies.

QUOTE

Contact and quote pages

The page that asks for details, judged with everything that leads to it.

CONTENT

Webinars and downloads

What the visitor will learn, the date and length, and an email field only.

05  How it works

From URL to changes, in minutes

  1. 01

    Paste the URL

    A landing page, a service page or a contact page. If the form opens on click, we open it.
  2. 02

    We read the site and the page

    What you offer and to whom, then the whole page: message, offer, proof, buttons and form, on desktop and mobile.
  3. 03

    You get the changes

    In under five minutes, in order, with a before and after for each one.

Ready to see your own page?

Landing pages, service and contact pages, from the first screen to the form, on desktop and mobile.

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06  Questions

Common questions

No. The form is one of six zones the audit reads. It also judges the first screen and the headline, the offer and what makes it different, the proof and where it sits, every call to action and what competes with it, and how the page works on a phone.

Audit the page that brings the most enquiries

Or the one that should. Pick a plan, or see what a report looks like first.